it’s good enough that you did visit. that itself is satisfactory enough. well i guess a lot of times i tend to ramble all around the point, rather than just state it, probably for poetic beauty or whatever. so in such times i guess quite a number of them get ‘lost in translation’.

cheers, Joyrode.

but frankly what kept me undecided is the layers in the poem. one one layer it is merely a poem about love-lost down the times, one that we wish we could get back. it is on that level that it fits into Beacons.

on another it is about dreams-lost. things that we wanted to become but couldnt. things we wanted to do but couldnt. and nothing shows that better than the trip back into time both physically as well as emotionally. it is on that level that it fits into Mirror(my personal journey into my past).

on another level, it shows the days that were, days that are, and days that will be, the whole purpose of the Gazebo category.

overall, it starts off with love, goes into success and failure, and ends in the possibilities of the future.

so i hope you understand my predicament.

but yes, it would more or less fit there. thanx for the suggestion.