Comments on: Broken

By: guptaghost

guptaghost — Thu, 05 Jun 2008 03:05:25 +0000

thank you. truly said. but the problem begins when we lose both. we leave one thing to get hold of another, and sometimes find that the other one is no longer as attractive as it seemed, and therefore are forced to leave it too.

the irony of the leave the bird in your hand to get a better bird. but philosophically speaking there is no better bird.

By: Divya

Divya — Sat, 31 May 2008 18:00:43 +0000

Day in and day out we keep on doing things which seem more imp than anything else little realising what we are losing parallely..the sooner we realise the myth we have been clinging on to the sooner well appreciate the reality..

very nicely written..

By: guptaghost

guptaghost — Fri, 09 May 2008 12:45:40 +0000

But the heart realises the greasepaint you don,
and you wonder if there is anything to really to con,

Eventually the wound will heal and so will the pain,
But the thought will keep reminding you of it again.

So although you go back to the beginning,
You have already left behind its meaning.

thanx. so do yours, though you dont write them often enough.

By: Citric Acid

Citric Acid — Fri, 09 May 2008 08:05:08 +0000

You keep the smile and the tears on
To evade queries, while, yourself you con

The wound cuts deeper and the pain you feel
Mercilessly mocks at your thought that it would heal

Too late to turn back and seek meaning
You trudge along, reality dawning..

Very well written, this one struck a chord, as do many other poems of yours. Keep writing.

By: guptaghost

guptaghost — Wed, 07 May 2008 07:48:25 +0000

thank you. must say it was more of my own life that i put down. but i guess after a point, your life, my life and everybody’s life seems to converge at that point. the point of everybody having the same problems but on a different level.

By: blissfulsoul

blissfulsoul — Tue, 06 May 2008 18:50:48 +0000

Wonderful Expression. Felt like my thoughts reflected in words.